So You Want to Write a Novel

The dream of writing a novel is a common one.  And probably most people sort of know what they’d like to be writing about.  Their own personal experiences, perhaps, or something out of history that’s fascinated them or maybe wild sci-fi theme.

But what is the best way to start?  Going to university to get a Master of Fine Arts degree is one way, but many people just don’t have the time and money for that.  And, perhaps surprisingly, there apparently isn’t much correlation between having an MFA degree and being a successful writer.

Most people take simpler steps.  Just sitting down to write is a good first step.  You soon discover though that you need more than this.  Writing is communication and to communicate well you need to learn the rules—the art and craft of writing.  There are many ways to learn the rules.

Rule #1:  Read, Read, Read. Not just the ordinary reading you do for fun but teach yourself to observe and analyze as you read.  Analyze the passages that really turn you on.  What is it the author has done to communicate effectively, to make characters come to life, to create a plot that pulls you into turning the page?

Rule #2:  Use resources like the Library and Internet. To craft a good book, you need to understand a lot about such facets of writing as plotting, building characters, point of view, tense.  Browse the reference section of a library on writing, look through the contents page to seek out these topics.  Alternatively, the Internet is a fantastic source.  You can feed in a phrase like “point of view literature” and see what comes up.  Probably almost too much information which is why a good book or two may be more helpful by summarizing and organizing the information for you.  (Try Writing the Breakout Novel by Donald Maass.)

Rule #3:  Mingle with other writers. Take a class at a community center, join a book club where several people read and discuss the same book, go to authors’ events at your local library, join a writing critique group where writers meet to read their own work and have the group critique it.  Last, but not least, consider joining a writers’ club. The California Writers Club, for instance, holds regular meetings featuring guest speakers, can put you in touch with critique groups, has news about conferences, workshops, and contests.

Rule #4:  Develop a thick skin. To improve your writing, it is essential to open it to criticism from others.  You can get practice in this through writing classes and critique groups.

Other [yawn! boring!]  stuff it’s good to be comfortable with. These include   rules of English usage, grammar, spelling, punctuation—knowing when to say “whose” and when to say “who’s”; knowing when to use “I, he, she, we, they” and when to say “me, him, her, us, them.”  Don’t rely on Spell-Check; that doesn’t know the difference either.  This is one reason it’s imperative to get a good editor before submitting a book to a publisher.  But it’s a good idea to get a feel for this stuff yourself.  (Try, for example, The Elements of Style by William I. Strunk, Jr. and E. B. White and The Elements of Grammar by Margaret Shertzer.)

Sociologist Margaret R. Davis’s new novel, The Miranda Affair (published by Sand Hill Review Press, 2017) is a light-hearted yet serious depiction of the political shenanigans that take place as women and men in a large corporation struggle to climb the corporate ladder.

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Margaret R. Davis’s debut novel, Straight Down the Middle (Kelso Books, 2009) is set in San Francisco in the mid-1980’s at a time when the gay revolution was at its height.  It is a humorous, romantic, sometimes spicy story about a lesbian woman’s quest to have a baby.

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  1. Dear Margaret,
    Your “rules” are extremely helpful. I look forward to being on the panel with you at the San Mateo County Fair on June 19th and I look forward to hearing you on Kim McMillon’s Blog Talk Radio Show “Writer’s Sanctuary.”
    Writing Career Coach Teresa LeYung Ryan says: “Build your name, beat the game, be happily published.”

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